Story ContinuedHere is the next bit of my story. Again I would love ANY criticism!Story Continued
Thank you, I really appreciate it all Auntie marge's name was changed to Alice by the way... so in the last note her name is marge and in this one she is Alice... pardon the confusion. But Auntie Marge is now Auntie Alice. I couldnt bare to give her the same name as Aunt Marge in harry Potter :P
We drifted into an awkward silence for a moment, and I took the chance to look around the room. My gaze fell over the fireplace where a picture of three young children hung, slightly crooked, above the brick mantle. I sauntered to the fireplace and look
My Patchwork HeartPrologueMy Patchwork Heart
It all happened the day I turned sixteen – somehow on that day I was inspired, inspired to discover the being that is my mother. That day I decided to turn my back on my life as I knew it and run – to where, I didn’t know until the end – but I knew I was going somewhere. It was the first time in my life that I felt I was doing something really important, something that could make a difference, even if the difference was only in my life and the people I met. It was like reading an old book, with the first few pages missing. You would go through the whole stor
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"Oh I'm still dreaming and it's getting better, I'm dreaming of Van!"~Dilandau Albatou~
CAN O' KORN!
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